Weekend

This weekend I went to My Lake. I Found cristls at my lake. Then my friends came To my lake and we went to the beach. Then we had a campfire and made marshmallows. Me and my friends paintid are Nails and did are makeup. And Then we went to sleep In my camper. And in the morning went to sele food and made a lot of money.πŸ’· πŸ’Ž 🍨 πŸ‘™ πŸŽ’ πŸ’…πŸΌπŸ˜πŸ˜œπŸ€‘β˜„ 🌌 πŸπŸ•― πŸ›ŒπŸ› .

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  1. Hey Grace, instead of using “me and my friends” say “my friends and I”, also instead of using “are” when describing an object like your nails and makeup use “our”. congratulations on spelling “marshmallows” correctly that’s a big word.

    -Shelby

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