Dylan’s Post on Tuesday, May 7, 2019

I have a cat. I am happy. I got him a couple months ago. I became an artist. I was being invited to Alex’s birthday party. (Scribed by Mrs. Maley)
I have lots of friends. My grandpa has a challenger. I like my teachers. My cat is kind of funny.

2 thoughts on “Dylan’s Post on Tuesday, May 7, 2019

  1. Awesome Dylan! I have a cat and she makes me happy too. My cat has been with me my whole life, she’s actually older than me! What kind of things does your cat do that make it funny? You also said you became an artist, what kind of art do you draw? I really liked your story, the only thing that could be improved would be how many times you used the word ‘I’. Maybe next time you write a story like this, try to find a different word to use, or maybe tell the story a different way. I still really like your story, and I think you did it even better than I would have done it when I was in grade 2.

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